Time has come for the sixth and very last blog. We haven´t got any specific theme or any other directions of how it’ should be designed. Carte blanche - as our teacher said. So this blog is our own choice. An easy one, was my first thought but I have been sitting starring at the screen for almost half an hour by now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok! Let´s start with the headline – Stubborn as a mule
A long and lazy summer holiday had come to it´s end and a new term was going to start. When I woke up in the morning I was sleepy as usual and was a bit late when I took my coat and bag. Standing there in front of the door, I felt that something was wrong, something was missing. Then I remembered - My keys, the keys to my locker, my workroom and to all classrooms in our school. Then the next question popped up in my head - Where did I put them? Last time I used them were in the beginning of June and now it was the middle of August. I panicked and desperately rushed through the house and tried to find the keys. I couldn´t see them anywhere. Since I was late I had to go.
When I finally came home again, I turned the house upside down in my efforts to find the keys. But they where gone. I remembered that I had taken care of them and putted them in a safe place, so I was certain about that they should be somewhere in our house. The only question was, WHERE?
The first week in school I tried to manage without keys. One day I had to go to our caretaker Bengt and sign up for a new key, but only the door key. My colleagues were delighted of my on way of catching my post in the locker. I used a very long ruler to catch my letters. From one of my friends I got a string for the key, in order to keep it around my neck.
At home the detective work continued for weeks and months. My husband was my assistant so he was involved, as well. I knew they were in the house somewhere and I was also certain that we were going to find them someday.
During the spring many of my colleagues told me to give up and they were laughing when I still were coming with my ruler. I believe they understood and that I´m stubborn as a mule.
This weekend something unexpected happened on Saturday morning. We were going to Vänersborg on a competition and I told my husband to use the rucksack instead of a plastic bag when he was putting down the training clothes. I was busy with something when he wanted to show me something very special - the KEYS. He found them in a pocket in the rucksack. What a lucky day! There they have been for almost a year - in the hall.
Tomorrow it´s Monday and the first thing I´ll do when I´m coming to school is to leave the key back to our caretaker, with a big and happy smile. I suppose my colleagues will be surprised when I can use a real key instead of my long ruler.
When the term has come to it´s end and the summer holidays are here again, I´m planning to put my keys in safe place, so I know where to find them when school starts again in August………. and why not in the rucksack?
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Dear Birgitta,
SvaraRaderaThank you for a very enjoyable blog about your long lost key. I really enjoyed reading it! There are probably a lot of people who have gone through the same thing, but most of us never manage to fing that very safe place where we have stowed away our important stuff!
As to the structure of your text, I wonder whether you chose to write it in the form of a narrative. At least that’s the text type that seems to come closest to what you have written. Still, the topic is perhaps not ideal for a narrative. Nevertheless, you stay true to the topic and create an interesting story. As to transitional devices, you enforce cohesion by the way you point out time in the topic sentences of the paragraphs. A piece of advice for the exam: check which type of text you are to write and follow the structure of such texts closely.
Your language is very good. However, I’ll point out a few things for you to work with. Think about subject-verb agreement, as in “Last time I used them were in the beginning of June ” and “when I still were coming ”. There you should also place the adverbial between the auxiliary and the main verb. In “I felt that something was wrong, something was missing.” you have a comma splice, and you should either have used a subordinate conjunction (that) or started a new sentence where the comma is now. Make sure you know how to conjugate the irregular verbs, e.g. put. Rather than “I was certain about that they would be” you just say “I was certain that they would be”. Think about using the proper tense, as in “There they have been for almost a year”, where the past perfect (had been) would have been the proper choice (they are no longer there, right?!). Make sure you know the difference between it’s and its.
Good luck for the exam!
Best,
Marika
Hello Birgitta
SvaraRaderaI really enjoyed reading your sixth blog. Isn't it fascinating how things can disappear for a long time and suddenly they are there. Sometimes I think we can have searched in the place where we find them earlier but then they weren't there.
You have a good english language and it is easy to read your text. I don't have so much to say about the language, the spelling or the grammar. As far as I can see you have done a good job.
Good luck
Maria
Hi Birgitta! I know exactly how you feel! It is also horrible to have lost a set of keys that belongs to another place than home. Your key to the home is not much fun to loose either...
SvaraRaderaWell done with your blog and such a fun and interesting subject. I can see how you and your husband is searching for the keys.
The only thing I have to say is that you had two words misspelled but that happens. :)
Hope you will have a nice summer!
Big hug,
Sofie Rönnqvist